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Here we have the most voted version and the other two shortlisted.
Thank you very much to all the students who have made all the effort into such a difficult task.
Here we have the most voted version and the other two shortlisted.
Thank you very much to all the students who have made all the effort into such a difficult task.
The
heroic city was couched in midday slumber. South wind, hot and sluggish, was smoothly blowing whitish
clouds which seemed to be dissipating when rushing northwards.
On the streets of the town the only thing heard was a strident rustle of swirling whirls of
dust, rags, straw and papers which were moving from brook to brook, from corner
to corner, from one side of the street to another, flitting and chasing each other like
butterflies that flock together and fly away being carried by invisible airflows.
Mila, 1st year Advanced Level
The heroic city was having a nap.
The warm and lazy southerly wind was pushing the whitish clouds which were torn
when they run towards the north. In the streets there was no noise, only the
shrill murmur from the whirls of dust, rags, straws and papers, which went from
stream to stream, from sidewalk to sidewalk.
Estefanía, 1st year Advanced Level
The city had fallen into
a deep sleep that evening. The clouds were pushed and torn by a warm and lazy
south wind. The silence on the streets was broken by the shrill sound of dust
whirls, rags, straw and paper, which were fidging from brook to brook, curb
to curb and corner to corner like butterlies flying around and which are
wrapped by the air in its folds invisible.
Paco, 1st year Advanced level
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